Suncomes's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Time Loog]

Gee!

Juste for the song, I give you a 6. I am so surprise to find a SNSD's song on NG.

[Medix - Episode 2]

Great

What language do the characters speak?

Animachado responds:

Portuguese.

[MFC's Miracle]

Nice song!

What is it. Where can i find it?

k3ltr0n responds:

its called shining star by yellow zebra i think

[RHG: Vapour vs. Blank]

Sorry?

Sorry about what? The joke with the three? The non-finished and poor movie?

If you didn't had time to finish it and you still wanted someone to see it, there's the data portal for this.

If not, don't be sorry and work on your creation. Come back when you'll have finish it or when you'll do something interesting and original.

MeLucky responds:

It's spelt tree*

[Super Cheese Head Eps 2]

Low frame ratio

Next time, i suggest you to work with a 24 to 30 frame/sec ratio. It was disturbing to see...all..the..freaking...frames...o f...your...movie. That slow it down and lose your viewer attention.

Though, for the story, number one. Same goes for the voice acting. For someone that was pushed in the back for it...

[[KK] Kitty Takes Drugs]

KK = nothing good in my dico.

Well, can KK do something ...researched? I mean, you were four to animate a two frame spam of a ugly cat "dancing" and had a stupid song on it? And it's not the first time I see things like that from you.

Well... you have the choice. On one side, you can work and get the viewers a something solid and interesting, on the other side, you can just quit it.

Make you choice.

[Phalanx]

Well done!

For a project done in a week, bravo!

Was it difficult to synchronise de sound and the pictures. I didn't learned to use sounds with Flash, so, do you have some advises?

P.S. Does the Fin at the end mean you'r frensh? Parce que c'est toujours agréable d'en rencontrer sur NG.

ZenMicroClock responds:

It's actually pretty easy to synchronize everything. I usually work with 30 frames per second and since sound travels at about 29.97 frames per second it's an almost perfect match up. And no I'm not french. Je suis desole.

[Cirque des Enfants]

Pretty nice

What interrested me the most in this movie was the story, embellished by the music. It serves it very well. The evolution of the soundtrack, the way it has to sound more and more psychotic as the movie goes is incredible. The drawing style is really good too the "naiveté" of the children versus the creepy chief of the circus... troublant.

But! (because there's always one) i think your coloring needs some improvement. It's likely to see uncolored pixels, or cutting rest (like for the leaves at the begining, There's still the whit pixels aroud...kind of disturbing for the eyes. Ho! And if you had to re submit it, or a least re-export it, you should correct the "Les cirque des enfants" for "Le ...". You just made a little mistake on the door of the circus.

Last thing! In one response to a comment, you said this song as a play in cirque du soleil...I don't think so, and i'm almost sure that this song is not in any show. But if you'r sure of what your saying, I'd be interested to know in wich show it plays.

Hope to see another flash from you soon!
Suncomes

Spune responds:

Hi thanks for the comments.

+ I didn't say it was a song used in Cirque Du Soleil. I said that the title "Cique Des Enfants" was a play on the title "Cirque Du Soleil" The music is an original piece of music written by my friend David FOR this cartoon.

+ There's lots of stuff I need improving on and I can assure you I cringe when I see those leaves and other stuff. I wanted it to be very handdrawn, papery. But yeah... those are bad. But I had a very tight deadline. I have done a lot of work for this quite short project, unfortunately some details like that just had to be left as they were as I tried to get it all finished. But yeah, I know what you mean and hope to change that some day.

Thanks though. I will continue to get better (especially now I'm off to uni) but I do wanna try and get another short out before I start there. Expect something new in the summer. Although Illustration and comicbooks is where my passion really lies. The boy and ringmaster in this are semi-designed off of comic book characters i've been working on for over a year.

Anyway thanks again.

[Love Bites!]

You know what's a déjà-vu?

I'm sure I've already saw it on NG, few weeks ago. Have you update it or have you resubmitted it?

ZenithQuinn responds:

there was no sound the first time so its a resubmit

[Ultimate MV Fighter 01]

Update needed

When doing your button, just copy-past the first frame of it. The rest is useless.

Then, for the movie, battle are not that originals.

But a Replay button could be nice?

Continu in this way. You'll improve.

mikaro responds:

Sorry, I was having trouble making the vid plus I'm new to this site. I'll try to fix the problem the best way I can.