Preloader
You need one. People will think you're movie is defectiv.
The movie's cute, the story's funny and effective. The visual quality could have been better, though.
Preloader
You need one. People will think you're movie is defectiv.
The movie's cute, the story's funny and effective. The visual quality could have been better, though.
thnx for your opinion. . . and you got right about the visual quality .it is bad. . .I will try to do better next time:)
cheers!
That was strong.
That was a powerfull way to spread your message. If this doesn't makes the front page, I don't know what's going on here.
A thousand tumbs up.
Good...good...What?
The oppening was good. The rest was lame.
What's that? A tweened pictures of an anime character, a joke that no one can understand and poor drawing.
Your opening was interesting. Shame the rest was this poor.
Great
It was a well animated movie. The drawing style was cute and the musical-runaway-scene well constructed. It's a shame, though, that there were no voices. You should try to find some voice actors for your futurs projects. You can find them on NG forum's, but the best places are the Voice Acting Alliance forum, the Voice Acting Club forum and the Voice Acting.co.uk. Good luck with your futur projects!
I planned to have voice acting, but my voice actors bailed out on me last minute. I guess facebook friends aren't the best resource to find voice actors huh...
but anyway, thanks for the advice. Hopefully I can find some voice actors on new grounds for me.
Hypnotic
It really was, and that's what kept me listening. Well done.
thanks
Good:)
It was good, for a stick dude movie. The storyline was good, the camera movement well done too. You should try to had some music to complete it. It was funny, but the sound of, well, nothing but screaming, didn't puch that feeling far enough to make me laugh. Also, you should avoid stick dudes at all prices!
Good job. Work harder and you'll do awesome stuff.
i have extremly limited resources. only been at this for a year. i wish i knew i could find more sound effects, thanks for reviewing
Humm
It was alright, but it's sad to hear a sound quality this poor for a "Lip Sync" lesson. Maybe you should take care of it... ho, and had a "play/pause" button.
Good call, I'll take care of that in the next one. I'll even recap a bit. Thanks for the seven, anyways!
Good, good
For a first flash, it's not quite bad since you've took the time to put a play and replay button. The idea was cute too.
To be totaly awesome, maybe you should have put more effort in the art itself, but it was still good.
I think you have what it takes to become really good at this. All you need to do is practice, practice and practice again!
Good luck
Okay
The art was good and the idea allright.
But maybe the voices could have been more expressive and the end more vivid. It felt flat compared to the first camera angle. Maybe you should have make too different shot, the first with the girl saying "FU" and the second with the man being shoot.
Don't stop improving.
Yeah.
I really tried to test deferent shots and angles.
Thank you very much for the tip! :)
Made me smile
For a first flahs movie, it isn't too bad. The story was really simple, but with a good animation, voices, and much more drama, it could get really funny.
Continu progressing and don't be shy to take a look to tutorial to get some advises.
Age 30, Female
Arts and Studies
Canada
Joined on 1/20/10