Suncomes's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Grom vs. Brom]

Preloader

You need one. People will think you're movie is defectiv.

The movie's cute, the story's funny and effective. The visual quality could have been better, though.

undertoon responds:

thnx for your opinion. . . and you got right about the visual quality .it is bad. . .I will try to do better next time:)
cheers!

[eyes wide open]

That was strong.

That was a powerfull way to spread your message. If this doesn't makes the front page, I don't know what's going on here.

A thousand tumbs up.

[[L*] The MMO]

Good...good...What?

The oppening was good. The rest was lame.
What's that? A tweened pictures of an anime character, a joke that no one can understand and poor drawing.

Your opening was interesting. Shame the rest was this poor.

[3 Hour flash 3]

Hypnotic

It really was, and that's what kept me listening. Well done.

BurntFoxProductions responds:

thanks

[Tester Thingy]

Good:)

It was good, for a stick dude movie. The storyline was good, the camera movement well done too. You should try to had some music to complete it. It was funny, but the sound of, well, nothing but screaming, didn't puch that feeling far enough to make me laugh. Also, you should avoid stick dudes at all prices!

Good job. Work harder and you'll do awesome stuff.

df36367 responds:

i have extremly limited resources. only been at this for a year. i wish i knew i could find more sound effects, thanks for reviewing

[Lip Sync Lesson]

Humm

It was alright, but it's sad to hear a sound quality this poor for a "Lip Sync" lesson. Maybe you should take care of it... ho, and had a "play/pause" button.

smirkstudios responds:

Good call, I'll take care of that in the next one. I'll even recap a bit. Thanks for the seven, anyways!

[Happy Vday thing]

Good, good

For a first flash, it's not quite bad since you've took the time to put a play and replay button. The idea was cute too.

To be totaly awesome, maybe you should have put more effort in the art itself, but it was still good.

I think you have what it takes to become really good at this. All you need to do is practice, practice and practice again!

Good luck

[The Forbidden Love]

Okay

The art was good and the idea allright.

But maybe the voices could have been more expressive and the end more vivid. It felt flat compared to the first camera angle. Maybe you should have make too different shot, the first with the girl saying "FU" and the second with the man being shoot.

Don't stop improving.

AmethystApple responds:

Yeah.
I really tried to test deferent shots and angles.
Thank you very much for the tip! :)

[Hot Summer Days]

Made me smile

For a first flahs movie, it isn't too bad. The story was really simple, but with a good animation, voices, and much more drama, it could get really funny.

Continu progressing and don't be shy to take a look to tutorial to get some advises.