Suncomes's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Distant Hearts]

Very Nice

A cheezy flash just as we love it.

First I had the impression the animation was rude, but I've turn to like that. The mouvments of the camera were strong and un supported well the story. Also, I simply loved the backgrounds. Did you make those in photoshop?

You're my discovery of the day. Hope to see more soon!

[i-waste]

Finaly!

Someone saying something! First time a I see a video like this on NG.

And to Blur777. Whaling ships are terrorists to whales. End of the line.

[tell her you love her]

Meaningful

That was deep. Nothing to laugh about.

I like the ambiance in general, the fact we were directly involved in the movie, not just witness of what happens. The drawing, the absence of color, the music, all was good.

Continu giving deep meaning to your flashs.

[Leina, Diamond Hunter!]

Good!

That was really good! The story was funny and the timing well set. I like the fact you used hand-made background. That haded sensibility and humour (rock hands, ^^).

Submit more!

[An Arthropod's Adventure]

Rough, but good

Your effort gave something, dear. That was rough, i mean the drawing style, but the story was good. Next time, try making something like a little fade out, or something to the sound in the end. The song endend really abruptly. I went like "Oh! Hum... ok, and... that's it?"

Hope i'll see the next flash soon. I easily can wait two more months.

[Caramelldansen elfen lied]

Animation problem

CHek the legs,. They're coming out of the dress. Also, i think it would have been better with the original version, in swedish, instead than in english.

mikuru15 responds:

check my newer version

[In Another Castle]

Yeah...

For a mario animation (wich is basicly not supposed to be original) it was all right. It was better than lots i've seen.

But have you thought of playing more with the pixels? What about pixelising your canon and the blood? That would look more finished.

[Okage - The Music Box]

Good

That's nice, but a bite long to start. I think that, to let people know it's a serious creation (because it is), you have two or three things to had.

Too had a loading page, go on the download section of newground, on top. You'll find preloaders's files, in fla. Follow the instruction to had it.

During the preloading time and right after it, you shoul had the title of your film, making it clear and evident. Had your name too. Be proud of your creation.

Last thing, too make your movie a movie... a mean, not a loop, you can had a stop effect at the very final frame. Look for flash didactial. They'll give you several easy-to-use codes, such as the stop one. If you don't find it, the preloader will do the job. At the end of your vid', it will automaticly return to the preloader. The button play will wait for the viewers to click on it!

Continu, dear. You have such a lot of potential. Use it well by imporving your technics.
Suncomes

Mayrune responds:

Thank you very much for your constructive review. It is my first creation so it was a learning experience.

[The Apple Situation]

Good

Your voice acting isn't this bad. It's alright, until the moment they start fighting. At this moment, the voices are less realistic. It seems just... "done because it had to be done".

If a character have to scream, make it SCREAAAAAM, and not just screaam.

Cartoon are made to be unrealistic, and it's even more the case with comic cartoon.

Though, your animation is quite nice. The faces are funny, well animated, and the moves are as fluids as they possibly can. And I got to give you a big, no, ENORMOUS point: the sound is clean. You know... no breathing in the mic, no background noise, it's clean. Congratulation!

Continu, you'll finish to get something perfect!

SirReginald responds:

Thanks for the input! My main problem with screaming is my mic is pretty sensitive and the quality gets crappy....i should probably work on that though.

[The Man Who Cant Be Moved]

Wonderfull

It's not your first flash, isn't it? You use different technique that prooves your knowlege of flash. That's great.

Bute the best thing is the way you pictured your story. Very sensitiv, very original. Too often, music video happens to be repetitive, boring, artists filling the empty times with too long moves or uninteresting pictures. The use of the words, appearing here and there, is a good way to make some "emphase" on the words (sorry for the french word, i didn't find it in english).

Congratualion, dear. I hope you'll have success. It's so nice to get what we deserve after months of work. I know what i mean! My own flashs took me 3 to 4 months to do.

Continu this way, Waiyan!

waiyan responds:

:D wow thank you! well, its not my first flash, because i always quit on all my flashes before i got it done. However, i decided to stick to this till the end and im glad i did :) thank you