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This is cute and well done, but you should re-do your prog. When we click the button to play again, the song starts again, even tough it didn't stop. So we have the same song playing twice, but at different rhythms.

But this is cute and it made me smile. Well done!

SWAGKOMICS responds:

im sorry 'bout that, im having problems with the last scene actionscript3.0 i didnt know the code to restart it so i just put it back to 1st scene

Great

The concept and the drawing was nice. Tough, the animation itself could easily be worked a bit more. The movement aren't as smooth as we would have liked them to be.

Also, you should boost the sounds quality. You can do it when you export the flash as a movie.

Good luck with your future project.

Unhingedsherifoxprod responds:

YES ..YES u R right
this sound dilemma was very annoying even to my bro
How could I" boost the sounds quality",please?
and Thanks for the comment suncomes

Oggie Boogie Blues!

That's an excellent in-progress work. Working on the visual shouldn't be too much of a probleme for you. The sound quality of the singer can be easily fixed by increasing the "Audio stream" and "Audio event" at their maximum when exporting your flahs or/and by re-recording it with a better mic.

The most difficult you'll have to do is to find the music of the Boogie Blues WITHOUT the original lyrics. If you have some talented friend, or know how to do that, you're lucky. Otherwise, you should try to find someone that could be abble to do that on forums and stuff.

Good luck and do not give up! You have potential in FBF-ing and in overall animation as well! I saw "Chase this Light" and I can tell you you'll go far!

lemonade998 responds:

Oh my goodness, thank you very much! I can't do much about rerecording the song, because it was recorded by another fan who I can't seem to get in contact with, but thank you so much for the tip on improving sound quality! I've been wondering for ages why the sound always comes out so badly! :D

Preloader

You need one. People will think you're movie is defectiv.

The movie's cute, the story's funny and effective. The visual quality could have been better, though.

undertoon responds:

thnx for your opinion. . . and you got right about the visual quality .it is bad. . .I will try to do better next time:)
cheers!

Great

It was a well animated movie. The drawing style was cute and the musical-runaway-scene well constructed. It's a shame, though, that there were no voices. You should try to find some voice actors for your futurs projects. You can find them on NG forum's, but the best places are the Voice Acting Alliance forum, the Voice Acting Club forum and the Voice Acting.co.uk. Good luck with your futur projects!

canarycharm responds:

I planned to have voice acting, but my voice actors bailed out on me last minute. I guess facebook friends aren't the best resource to find voice actors huh...
but anyway, thanks for the advice. Hopefully I can find some voice actors on new grounds for me.

Hypnotic

It really was, and that's what kept me listening. Well done.

BurntFoxProductions responds:

thanks

Good:)

It was good, for a stick dude movie. The storyline was good, the camera movement well done too. You should try to had some music to complete it. It was funny, but the sound of, well, nothing but screaming, didn't puch that feeling far enough to make me laugh. Also, you should avoid stick dudes at all prices!

Good job. Work harder and you'll do awesome stuff.

df36367 responds:

i have extremly limited resources. only been at this for a year. i wish i knew i could find more sound effects, thanks for reviewing

Humm

It was alright, but it's sad to hear a sound quality this poor for a "Lip Sync" lesson. Maybe you should take care of it... ho, and had a "play/pause" button.

smirkstudios responds:

Good call, I'll take care of that in the next one. I'll even recap a bit. Thanks for the seven, anyways!

Okay

The art was good and the idea allright.

But maybe the voices could have been more expressive and the end more vivid. It felt flat compared to the first camera angle. Maybe you should have make too different shot, the first with the girl saying "FU" and the second with the man being shoot.

Don't stop improving.

AmethystApple responds:

Yeah.
I really tried to test deferent shots and angles.
Thank you very much for the tip! :)

Help

To find a preloader, go to the Download section of NG. You'll find free-easy-to-install one.

Anyway, is that YOUR video or did you took it from anywhere else?

rpg-gamer-1992 responds:

it's mine

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