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[Kakashi Boss Fight Scene]

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To find a preloader, go to the Download section of NG. You'll find free-easy-to-install one.

Anyway, is that YOUR video or did you took it from anywhere else?

rpg-gamer-1992 responds:

it's mine

[In search of Dragula]

Great

For a first attempent , it's stunning. Bravo. You learned really fast.
The idea was good and the music well supported by the pictures design.
Take care of some details, though. The trees, by example, are not just slidding from one side to the other. The jump back and fort, and it's a bit disturbing for the eyes. Also, I'm in the impression you cut the song and put pieces of it in differents scene while making your movie. The music jumps a little when you change scenes. Instead, you should animate all your scene and then put them all on the same seen, with a specific layer for the music. It will goes smoother.
Nice lipsink with the vampire. It's hard to do and you did well for a begginer.
Continu and you'll get really good at it.

Darkest-Darkness responds:

Thanks, your review I found it most helpful. I just noticed the trees, and they are dizzying. You'r right about the cutting the song, i found that was the easiest way to test once you finish animation, but you're right that at the end I should just put it all together in once scene. Something i'll definately be doing in the future.

Thanks again for your comment!

[Thought I'd Seen It All]

Wow

Animation was fluide.
Jokes were really good.
Voices were hilarious.
FP for sure!

[Newton Trip]

Souvenir

It remembers me of something... haven't I already seen it somewhere. Not wait, I'm SURE I've already seen it!

Even though it's cool, have you resubmit your project or have you post it somewhere else? Because, of course, you couldn't have STOLE it, no...

[Hamburger Moon]

Niiice.

Sad there was no replay button...

[Shower Products for Men]

OMG

I already AM a big fan of Hyperbole & a Half's blog. I didn't knew there was flashs of it!

Chag responds:

The first, will there be more? That's her decision

[Lady Killers]

I know, it's just a beggining

but i think you'll have to work on the atmosphere, on the background, on the story and on the animation to get trough your University programe...

Nice you understood the use of tween motion, but if your drawing is not clean, it won't be nice, even if it's kind of fluid.

Also, your other major point is to put some music in your movie. If the story is more about the dialogues, put some low music in background just to create an atmosphere. Otherwise, it sounds empty.

Work hard and submit your next animation. Maybe you'll get nice reviews.

QueenPenny responds:

Hey !
As a beginner to animating I really do admire your comments as they will help me in future submissions. I will definitely try to clean up my drawing a bit and improve on the other factors you mentioned.
Thank you very much for commenting.

[An unexpected love story]

Need some improvements

The grass stands still while the rest of the pictures is moving
Stick man... c'mon...
The strory is, well, simple.
Do something about your preloader!

[Africa Dudes]

The movies were nice, but the music...^^

Cirque du Soleil song
Sweeney Todd song
That just surprised me

[I Am Cow!]

"Meuh"

That was great. Altough, you should have put the music a bit louder. The story-supportive-sound were too loud compared to the music.

Your animation was good, the paper effect was well choosed and the music choice was wise. I had fun looking at this.

Keep creating.